[m-rev.] for review: updates for non-C grades in user's guide

[Zoltan Somogyi]

2020-06-21 23:56 GMT+10:00 Julien Fischer<jfischer at opturion.com>:
>> All of the above is likely to be confusing. In my experience, if you what you write
>> follows the schema "Do action A. But if condition C holds, then do action B instead",
>> then people will do A as soon as they have read the first sentence, even if
>> condition C holds. (I got this is a lot in lab classes). I have learned to put the
>> conditions up front.
>>
>> If you don't want to take a stab at such a rewriting, I will do it after you commit.
> 
> I'm not entirely sure what you have mind, so please do.

The attached diff makes the changes I was talking about, and a few more
I found I needed to set things up. For post-commit review by Julien.

Zoltan.
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