[m-rev.] For review: Improved the mmc --make documentation in the User Guide.

Julien Fischer juliensf at csse.unimelb.edu.au
Thu Mar 11 18:44:26 AEDT 2010


On Mon, 8 Mar 2010, Paul Bone wrote:

> Improved the mmc --make documentation in the User Guide.
>
> Branches: main, 10.04
>
> doc/user_guide.texi:
>     Split lines on sentance boundaries in some cases.

s/sentance/sentence/

>     Re-wrote a passive sentance to form an clearer active sentance.
>
>     Split a long sentance into two sentances.
>
>     Inserted a missing 'the'.
>

That looks fine.

Julien.
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