[m-rev.] for review: update website for 10.04.1 release

[Ian MacLarty]

On Mon, Aug 30, 2010 at 11:31 AM, Julien Fischer
<juliensf at csse.unimelb.edu.au> wrote:
> Index: download/include/release-10.04.inc
> ===================================================================
> RCS file:
> /home/mercury/mercury1/repository/w3/download/include/release-10.04.inc,v
> retrieving revision 1.1
> diff -u -r1.1 release-10.04.inc
> --- download/include/release-10.04.inc  19 Jul 2010 06:07:39 -0000      1.1
> +++ download/include/release-10.04.inc  30 Aug 2010 01:26:38 -0000
> @@ -1,4 +1,21 @@
> -<h2>New in relase 10.04 of the Mercury distribution</h2>
> +<h2>New in release 10.04.1 of the Mercury distribution</h2>
> +
> +<p>
> +This release is primarily a bug-fix release.  It fixes some problems in
> +the code generator and the source-to-source debugger.  In the addition,

In addition,

> +there are some changes to the standard library.
> +
> +<p>
> +
> +Changes to the Mercury standard library:
> +

I suggest: "In addition, there are some changes to the standard
library:" followed by the list of changes.  i.e. remove "Changes to
the Mercury standard library" heading above.

Looks fine otherwise.

Ian.

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