[m-rev.] for review: minor w3 improvements

[Zoltan Somogyi]

download/include/rotd.inc:
include/download.inc:
	Minor improvements in expression.

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RCS file: /home/mercury/mercury1/repository/w3/download/include/rotd.inc,v
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -b -r1.11 rotd.inc
--- download/include/rotd.inc	15 Nov 2005 22:37:41 -0000	1.11
+++ download/include/rotd.inc	22 Nov 2005 07:13:50 -0000
@@ -123,10 +123,10 @@
 <li> For Windows,<p>
      <ol>
      <li> To compiler the source distribution on Windows you 
-          will need <a href=http://www.cygwin.com/>Cygwin</a>,
+          will need either <a href=http://www.cygwin.com/>Cygwin</a>,
           which you can download
-          <a href=http://www.cygwin.com/setup.exe>here</a> or
-	  <a href="http://www.mingw.org">MSYS</a>. 
+          <a href=http://www.cygwin.com/setup.exe>here</a>,
+	  or <a href="http://www.mingw.org">MSYS</a>. 
           Both Cygwin and MSYS include GNU C and GNU Make.<p>
      <li> You can optionally use
           <a href="http://msdn.microsoft.com/visualc/default.asp">
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retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -b -r1.4 download.inc
--- include/download.inc	15 Nov 2005 22:37:41 -0000	1.4
+++ include/download.inc	22 Nov 2005 07:07:57 -0000
@@ -8,8 +8,9 @@
 
 <H3> Current stable release </H3>
 
-The most stable release will be a <em>numbered release</em>, such as 0.10.1 or
-0.11.0.   These releases have been extensively tested, and often have 
+The most stable release will be a <em>numbered release</em>,
+such as 0.10.1, 0.11.0 or 0.12.1.
+These releases have been extensively tested, and often have 
 pre-compiled binary packages for easy installation.
 <p>
 The <a href="download/release.html">current stable release</a>
@@ -38,10 +39,11 @@
 
 <H3> Release of the day </H3>
 <p>
-To cater for those who need access to the latest cutting edge features
-of Mercury, we release a daily snapshot of the development system.  This is
-called a "release of the day (ROTD)" and is given a version number
-"rotd-YYYY-MM-DD" according to the date it was built.  
+To cater for those who need access to the latest features of Mercury,
+we release a daily snapshot of the development system.
+This is called a "release of the day (ROTD)".
+Each ROTD is given a version number
+"rotd-YYYY-MM-DD" according to the date on which it was built.  
 <p>
 The <a href="download/rotd.html">current release of the day</a>
 is version <? echo $rotd_version; ?>.
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